From 0f783936b822e5fff4b30fe9f0ee203036c35532 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: str4d <str4d@mail.i2p>
Date: Thu, 10 Jul 2014 00:45:35 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Improved intro text

---
 app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml b/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
index 4a0beba..ac4af41 100644
--- a/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
+++ b/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
     <string name="swipe_to_start">Swipe to start</string>
     <string name="i_know_what_to_do">I know what to do</string>
     <string name="intro_1_1">Traditional email is insecure. It was not designed to protect people from dragnet surveillance.</string>
-    <string name="intro_1_2">Even if you encrypt your emails, the email metadata can be monitored to reveal large amounts of information about you.</string>
-    <string name="intro_2_1">Bote is a new kind of email that provides complete end-to-end privacy and security.</string>
-    <string name="intro_2_2"></string>
+    <string name="intro_1_2">Even if you encrypt your email contents, the email metadata can be monitored to reveal large amounts of information about you and the people you talk to.</string>
+    <string name="intro_2_1">Bote is a new kind of email that provides complete end-to-end privacy and security. It runs on the I2P anonymity network, which hides your activity.</string>
+    <string name="intro_2_2">When you send an email in Bote, everything is encrypted - including the email metadata. Only the recipient can download and read the email.</string>
     <string name="intro_3_1">With traditional email, you need to trust a central server. And if it is blocked, you can\'t send or receive emails.</string>
     <string name="intro_3_2">Bote uses a distributed peer-to-peer network, similar to BitTorrent. Encrypted emails are split up and stored with many other Bote users.</string>
-    <string name="intro_4_1">When you send an email in Bote, everything is encrypted - including the email metadata. Only the recipient can download and read the email.</string>
-    <string name="intro_4_2">An outsider can only see that an email was sent, not who sent it. And if the recipient never publishes their address, the outsider can\'t even tell who the recipient is.</string>
+    <string name="intro_4_1">Adversaries can only see that an email has been sent. They can\'t see the real identity of the sender or recipient.</string>
+    <string name="intro_4_2">And Bote emails can be sent with a delay; the sender could be long gone before the encrypted email is stored, preventing timing attacks.</string>
     <string name="intro_5_1">Because Bote is a little different to traditional email, there are a few things to set up before you can start using it.</string>
     <string name="intro_5_2">The setup wizard will take a couple of minutes, and then everything will be ready.</string>
     <string name="lets_get_started">Let\'s get started</string>